Here's Version Two. I wanted to include some things about CFC making gains while they get nothing:
The main addition is paragraph 2 - I took a previous sentence and expanded it into a new paragraph. The rest is unchanged. Let me know if you like this version better.
If you don't want to offer 2 great persons, now would be a good time to make the case against this offer. The general previous consensus though was that it would be worthwhile.
Draft 2 for Apolyton/CivPlayers Wrote:Apolyton and CivPlayers,
I'm sending this to both of your teams since it has been clear for awhile that you are working closely together. I understand the position you guys are in. You don't want to commit to peace with us, but you don't want to leave us alone to tech peacefully. That's completely fair. However, I think you guys are smart enough to know that a full war with us will just be a stalemate. I'm just going to be 100% honest with you guys: we are tracking your builds very closely, and we basically know what you guys have and what you might attack us with. We know it's enough to do some damage, but we also know we will be able to stop it before you guys gain too much. We've even done some simming on killing different stack compositions. Needless to say, our warmongery members are a little too eager about the idea of killing off a dogpile.
Regardless, I think the only winner in this conflict would be CFC, and I don't think you guys want that any more than we do. The reality is we are pushing everything to our western border right now, since we see your teams whipping/drafting, and your NAP expires 5 turns sooner. Our calculations suggest you guys could take 1, maybe 2 cities maximum, then we would hold it to a stalemate. However, if CFC wants they could just walk into our back side 5 turns later. So you guys would do all the work and make no real gains, while CFC takes everything uncontested and becomes the new runaway. I don't think that's such a great deal for your teams, but it's fantastic for CFC.
So I have one last idea for a peaceful compromise:
* NAP until T230 between all 3 of us
* RB will be generating two great persons in the upcoming turns. The first will complete on Turn X, the second will complete on Turn Y. The great person odds on X are <fill them in>, the great person odds on Y are <fill them in>. We will gift you each one of them. You guys can decide between yourself who gets which one.
This is the absolute best offer we can make. It's actually a little too much in my opinion (there is quite a bit of disagreement within our team over this), but our team has decided to offer it. I'd remind you that when it comes to keeping pace with us, this is basically denying us a golden age. If you don't take this, we'll be using this for a golden age at a very decisive time. If you take this, we'll be passing up on that, and our economic recovery will be slowed down considerably. We've also invested heavily in military to defend against both of you rather than building economic things, so you would have accomplished your goals of slowing us down, not to mention the bonus you both would get from a great person.
I would also ask that you please let us know your answer pretty quickly. This offer will have to expire as soon as the turn rolls to T170.
Thanks!
scooter - Team RB
The main addition is paragraph 2 - I took a previous sentence and expanded it into a new paragraph. The rest is unchanged. Let me know if you like this version better.
If you don't want to offer 2 great persons, now would be a good time to make the case against this offer. The general previous consensus though was that it would be worthwhile.

